Visit to the zoo.

Visit to the zoo

It was a worm and sunny day when someone showed up at my house ¨Hello I work for Christchurch City Council (CCC) I am an agent and I need your help,¨ he said ¨ to save a giraffe from a zoo because the zookeepers aren't treating him right. will you help me?”
¨yes of course”  I said.


As we sat at the kitchen table we discussed how we were going to get the griffe out. We came up with three ideas: plan A, B, C. plan A was to go to the zoo owner and ask nicely if they would stop hurting them. If that didn't work we would move onto plan B which is to get into the zoo, and sneak past the zoo keepers and open the cage and let him out when no one was looking. And if that didn't work we would go to plan C which is to dress up as zoo keepers and when it's feeding time they will feed him and then when knowone is watching they will lead the giraffe out of the bake of the zoo.


It was time for plan A. We arrived at the zoo to have an interview with the zoo owner so we went to have an interview with him and get him to be nicer to the animals we went up to his office but it didn't really work out because his security threw us out like trash. So it was time to move onto plan B. Later that day in the afternoon we went back to the zoo and dressed up as normal people who were going out on a family trip to the zoo. So we worked around the zoo for a little bit so we didn't look sesbishes, then we worked over to where the giraffes were but as we found the giraffes but the one we were looking for. was not there he was way at the back behind all the other giraffes you could just see the cage behind the trees. As we found a way to get into the little area around after we worked down the little hallway made of stone but as we came out we could see that there were people around the cage guarding him so we ran back and went out and sat in the car. It was time for plan C and if this failed there would be no hope. So we got out of the car, the plan was to sneak into the staff room and take some uniform and then look at the feeding time roster for the animals to see what time he would eat. Next we walked back into the zoo we walked to the staff room and found some extra uniform that we put on and then we had to ...

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This is my narrative writing that we have been writing over a few weeks. I have not finessed my story yet or edited it we have been writing it for writing also my book cover has been made by my friend Gennah you can go look at her blog here.