This is a little snippet of my writing that is a work if progress I hope you like it.
Visit to the zoo
It was a worm and sunny day when someone showed up at my house ¨Hello I work for Christchurch City Council (CCC) I am and agent and I need your help,¨ he said ¨ to save a griffe from a zoo because the zookeepers aren't treating him right.¨ will you help me? ¨yes of course I said.¨
Aloha Kade,
ReplyDeleteI really think your story is interesting. I would love to read more.
It is great that you used capital letters.
From Jennah
Hi Kade,
ReplyDeleteI love the snippet of your writing!
I am exited to see full story.
hello kade.
ReplyDeleteI really like this amazing story.
i love how you made it on your own.
i think you are the king.
Hello Kade I really like your your blog post.
ReplyDeleteI like that you have used lots of postulation.
are you going to post more of the story?
Hi Kade,
ReplyDeleteI like this blog post and I cant wait to hear the rest of the story,
I really like this blog post on how it is. Keep up the good work :)
Thank you :)
DeleteHi Kade i like this blog post i cant wait for the real full story i hope the giraffe is not beaten half to death yet.
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